In our unit we worked on social issues,in books. The book that I got was Shiloh, We had to figure out what the social issue was . Hope hope
This unit my class each picked person a explorer. as you can see, I picked Giovanni da Verrazzano. It was are job to become a expert on this person.We used Narable to make our projects. I hope you love it.
The reason why persuasive essays are so effective is because they stand for one point on one point only!
They don’t say No because, and then yes because, you can only stand for one opinion. You try and change people’s minds about you topics. The reason why, is most of the time your readers is on the other side of you opinion, and you need to change that! You need evidence that is real, a hooking introduction and conclusion. So next time you read a persuasive essays see if they have all of these details.
Last week are teacher gave us a writing assessment to revise the first piece in writing. I found a lot of errors like. Dialogue, I had a lot of people talking. awwbbbooss, like compound sentences. fanboys. So I hope you like it!
What I am thankful for
I am thankful for my family and friends, my teachers, my parents, animals, and the world we live in. I am thankful for my family and friends because they help me and they play with me. They get me up when I am down. They watch and play football with me. They will make sure I am ok when they think I am hurt.
I am also thankful for my teachers because they teach me and they help me when I need help. They help make us better at math, reading, writing and more.
I am also thankful for my parents. They provide a warm home and put food on the table. They work hard to put us in a good school. They love us, and play with us too.
I am also thankful for animals because they are interesting. They give us food, too. They are pretty cool to look at. They give clothes sometimes. They help us live.
I am also thankful for the world because it gives us air to breath, and grass to play on. It gives us plants to grow and trees to look at in the fall. It has gravity so we won’t float up to space.
That is what I am thankful for.
Peyton Manning is the best quarter back ever.
I love Peyton Manning. I hope you will to!!
Peyton Manning was born in New Orleans, Louisiana on March 24, 1976. He is now 37 years old. I think Peyton Manning is the best quarterback in the NFL. Peyton plays for the Denver Broncos. His family is famous!! His dad is Archie Manning, and his two brothers are Cooper and Eli. His brother Eli plays for the New York Giants. His dad Archie Manning played for the New Orleans Saints, the Houston Oilers, and the Minnesota Vikings.
Peyton Manning attended high school at Isidore Newman School. He led his team to a 34-5 winning record. The other team’s coaches were afraid to face Peyton’s team. In Peyton’s senior year he was named National Player-of-the-Year. He won the Columbus Touchdown Club, and National Offensive Player-of-the-Year in 1993.
Peyton Manning went to college at the University of Tennessee. Peyton’s arm was so good he passed 523.6 yards in one game. He set national passing records. Peyton threw a lot but he threw accurate. Peyton stayed at college and got his degree.
Peyton Manning was a first round pick in the draft. He was drafted to the Colts. His number is 18. He was in the semi finals in the playoffs against the Patriots and lost. It happened again and again. But one time Peyton was eager to win. They were losing to the Patriots again, but Manning was not going to lose again. Peyton threw a 80 yard pass for a touchdown, and the Colts won it 38 to 34.The Colts won the Super Bowl in 2006-2007 season!!!
Peyton was drafted to the Broncos after playing for the Colts for 14 years. Peyton’s number is still 18. The Broncos are the best team in the league now. He might get his second Super Bowl ring. No doubt he is going to be in the Hall of Fame